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You did an exceptional job on this with it being your first animation, but there was a ton of things you could of improved. One, the movie just seemed...slow?, especially since he was escaping. Another thing is that his only offensive ability seemed to be that he ate people with his hand haha. On the next one try and send out more than one "ball" thing. An example was when he was confronted by the three guards at the beginning, a nice big explosion would of been better. And three, try and pay a little more attention to detail, especially later in the series. As for explosions and such dont just take a chunk out of something, if that makes sense. Overall for all the effort and being nice because this was your first, I voted a 5.
Author's Response:
lol, This comment was funny XD Every one sees it as only one move, he uses three in the hole thing, Sole obsorb(I spell bad XD), energy sheald and Orb exploion. His three new moves for the next one will be Sole Cannon, Sloe Blade and Area absorb. Thankya for your time and the review.^-^
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I liked this alot, I thought I was watching the movie for a second there haha. As for animation, you did a good job with the expressions also.
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I actually liked this, so I'm just going to tell you some things that bother me. One, the mouths on the figures when they talk. Two, the effects could use a face lift. And three, this is just something personnel, but I'd like to see more detail in the backgrounds. Overall you did pretty good and I'm feeling nice so...4/5
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